Wow. This was great. The video definitely taught the viewer about Franklin Gothic. There was a lot of information in the video and I loved how you transitioned things in and out of the screen. A couple of times I had a hard time focusing on certain words in order to get the information, so maybe some parts could be slowed down for the viewer to get a better idea of what is being communicated. Overall though you did an excellent job for our first flash project.
I love how whimsical your movie is! its very cute too. The sound effects are perfect for the movements of your letters. I think you have taught the viewer about the font in a user friendly way, and the button makes it more interesting and interactive. Great job!
You tried out a lot of different effects! I think your animation does a great job of explaining the different characteristics of your font in an entertaining matter. I love that treatment you use with the texture inside the letterform. You might want to get rid of the non-link link you have on the page heading (I kept wanting to click on the header because it brings up that link hand thingie—I'm sure there's a technical term for it...). Also, you might consider making that white button flash or glow during the animation, just in case someone misses the hint. Great job! silvia.
Everything turned out really great! Your animation is done very nicely; the images, the sound, transitions all work together perfectly. It does a rally great job of teaching the viewer about your font.
Wow. This was great. The video definitely taught the viewer about Franklin Gothic. There was a lot of information in the video and I loved how you transitioned things in and out of the screen. A couple of times I had a hard time focusing on certain words in order to get the information, so maybe some parts could be slowed down for the viewer to get a better idea of what is being communicated. Overall though you did an excellent job for our first flash project.
ReplyDeleteI love how whimsical your movie is! its very cute too. The sound effects are perfect for the movements of your letters. I think you have taught the viewer about the font in a user friendly way, and the button makes it more interesting and interactive. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYou tried out a lot of different effects! I think your animation does a great job of explaining the different characteristics of your font in an entertaining matter. I love that treatment you use with the texture inside the letterform. You might want to get rid of the non-link link you have on the page heading (I kept wanting to click on the header because it brings up that link hand thingie—I'm sure there's a technical term for it...). Also, you might consider making that white button flash or glow during the animation, just in case someone misses the hint. Great job!
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Everything turned out really great! Your animation is done very nicely; the images, the sound, transitions all work together perfectly. It does a rally great job of teaching the viewer about your font.
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